more experimenting

so we had a crit on tuesday and it appears that i need to experiment more with the line of my work, and also some of the final pages need altering, i agreed with everything that was said, i think i was just rushing with the collage, trying to finish it off to get it out of the way in order to concentrate on my Honours project. But more work is needed on the book, so here is a mono print, and one that i photoshopped a bit of colour in to.